So many times I wanted this to say
Don’t you worry at all I won’t go away
When ever u ll need me just give me call
I ll try every thing and i ll be there
When u ll get Old and Your hair will become gray
When the only thing on tongue will only be just gods pray
When u will close your eyes and will wish to see me
Just give me a call n i ll be there
As u were with me in my sickness and health
As u were there in my poverty and wealth
As u helped me in all mental/physical and financial way
Please just give me a call n i ll be there
I ll be there for u every day and all the time
If it takes from me everything then also it is fine
You just don't worry guys don't feel alone
U have done your duties now its time of my role
Just don’t hesitate and give me a call
Your presence is important which comes above all
Don’t think about any thing be relaxed and feel free
I will take care of every thing its my time to see
You have done all the things whatever u could do
U have made us proud and now its my turn too
If u find something wrong let me know and correct me
Just give me a call bcz there is no I its all about only WE
May be i won’t be near bcz of some work or some reasons
But the truth is that i love u so much more then anyone
U mean everything to me, in all my ways
I just can’t think without u guys, my any single day
If u have any issue please just don’t hesitate
Just give me call guys n really i ll be there
trust me i won't let u down.
This one is dedicated to my MOM DAD from me n Dada..
Mamma Paa we really love u a lot more then any thing n we mean it right daa....
Worst in terms of rhyming :-)
ReplyDeletebut very touching.....
I am proud...
Vipin! You're a gem. Such a beautiful and fantastic poetry this is! I loved the 3rd verse to the core "As u were with me in my sickness and health......". For more than a minute or two i had got emotional and I admit, tiny droplets of tears appeared in my eyes. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDelete-Love,
Priyal
@ anupam BHIYA - thnx :) i knw abt the rhyme
ReplyDelete@ Priyal - AAAHHH thnk u so much sweetheart :) i guess this is the first time u r on my BLOG :) but really i m so glad tht u got some time for this thnx a lot :)
Great man and i must say a perfect start "SO MANY TIMES I WANTED THIS TO SAY,
ReplyDeleteDON'T YOU WORRY AT ALL I WON'T GO AWAY". awesome creation. good luck buddy
Mera bhai to kavi ban gaya. Bahut achhee kavita likhi hai. Shadi kar fir baat karoonga tujhase is baare main :)
ReplyDelete@ Humanshu - Hey thnx a lot buddy for the appreciation..
ReplyDelete@ Shashank daa - Oyyee aisi koi baat nahi hai maini sare terms mom dad k bata diye hai n i can assure u i ll be there :)
BTW thnx for the सराहना ;)
yeah bata aii baba ko padhaya ya nahi..
ReplyDeleteTruly Vipin-ish :)
ReplyDeleteKiddish, a little silly, & still, heart-warming... filled with LOADS of true EMOTIONS, honesty and love!
You rock, buddy... Jiyo mere laal :P
@ karruu - yes dude they knw abt this ..
ReplyDelete@ Ruu - thnx :) wht can i say this is me. BTW which part u think is silly we will discuss on tht in person ;) but really thxn a lot.